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避免错误开头方式（工程类）PERSONAL STATEMENTBy Yang FengjuanAn experienced electronic engineer trained in China's major cradle of technological talents, I am submitting this document in support o.....
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语言干涩表达错误（会计类）PERSONAL STATEMENTby Li Qiang该文原稿语言干涩，且很多地方表达错误，或不合作者本意。试看第一段剖析。A senior student at the business school headed by China's tough Prime .....
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讲好故事首尾呼应（化学类）PERSONAL STATEMENTBy Guan Zhiyuan要么不讲故事，要讲就要讲好。 要讲好，必须首尾呼应，并与文章的主题紧密联系。"Why on earth does anybody want to do 5000-meter heel-and-toe.....
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结合各个方面内容（建筑类）PERSONAL STATEMENTBy Jiang Hua注意怎样把自己的背景与学习目的和能力结合起来。This document is being submitted in support of my application for admission into your program.Born.....
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清晰叙述专业改换（教育类）PERSONAL STATEMENTJia Xin原作者岁数不大，但专业改换不少。怎样才能讲清楚现在申请的专业现在有其必然性呢？In China as in the US, one can easily give up the career of a language .....
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材料组织凌乱无序（经济类）STATEMENT OF PURPOSEBy Zhou Ming正在读大学的申请者，也许可以参考这种写作法来完成自己的statement.A top student of international finance at the Beijing University, probably Chi.....
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清晰叙述专业改换（教育类）PERSONAL STATEMENTJia Xin原作者岁数不大，但专业改换不少。怎样才能讲清楚现在申请的专业现在有其必然性呢？In China as in the US, one can easily give up the career of a language .....
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尽量选择独特角度（计算机类）PERSONAL STATEMENTBy Jin Sheng本科生往往没有太多的东西可写，重要的是要找到unique的角度。本文学习目的写得相当明确。A fourth-year student grounded solidly in the basics of co.....
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个人陈述-语言类PERSONAL STATEMENTBy X X XIn connection with my application for acceptance into your Ph. D. program, I am enclosing the following statement concerning my life, professional activities, .....
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个人陈述-计算机类PURPOSE STATEMENTKnowing where one is heading during navigation brings assured happiness. As a student majoring in Computer Software, I began my odyssey four years ago. Now，after the.....
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个人陈述-经济类PSTATEMENT OF PURPOSEDue to the comprehensiveness of China's “Reform and Open” policies, economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global.....
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个人陈述-工程类PURPOSE STATEMENTMechanical engineering is the foundation of industry. It plays a key role in the national economy. Its broad field including general engineering, aeronautical, chemical.....
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个人陈述-国际关系类STATEMENT OF PURPOSEBy Qian YongAn MA student who enjoys intellectual challenges, I am applying for acceptance into your doctoral program so that I can scale grander intellectual he.....
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个人陈述-化学类PERSONAL STATEMENTWith the approach of new century, the developing China is requiring better trained and more highly educated men and women than ever before in history. In order to make.....
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个人陈述-传播类PERSONAL STATEMENTGao PengfeiA student of the Peking University's inaugural program of advertising, I am writing in support of my application for acceptance into your graduate prog.....
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询问被录取机会的信件寄申请材料以前，询问被录取机会的信件：Wen LuquP. O. Box 8740Beijing 100080People's Republic of ChinaDear Professor Speegle:Thank you for forwarding to the application and reco.....
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询问是否给予奖学金的决定学校通知近期将作出给予奖学金的决定, 学员写的询问信Dear Professor Hope:Thank you for your email last Saturday. From your letter, I learned that your department would make the de.....
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询问奖学金是否足够学校已答应给奖学金，学员询问奖学金是否够支付学费和生活费April 1, 1999Dear Professor Enough:Very pleased to know that I have been offered admission into your graduate program in Compu.....